Grace, Excellent work. Revisions done completely. I like how you turn a phrase. May I suggest a pen next time for a final draft? Bonus for using a vocabulary word. -Papa
Grace, I am afraid of monkeys. I have not been around them much, but one time in India I was really scared of a monkey that grabbed my shirt by surprise. Was your favorite monkey more like Curious George? - Lou
Grace,
ReplyDeleteExcellent work. Revisions done completely. I like how you turn a phrase. May I suggest a pen next time for a final draft? Bonus for using a vocabulary word.
-Papa
Grace,
ReplyDeleteI am afraid of monkeys. I have not been around them much, but one time in India I was really scared of a monkey that grabbed my shirt by surprise. Was your favorite monkey more like Curious George? - Lou